Archive for July, 2007
Muses and Miracles
My muse – my secret self – so lovely and ethereal – life bursting forth in shy glory, reaching for the light, reaching for me. She tends to the miracles that spring from my subconscious, my vibrational energy: witnessing, approving, validating, nurturing. Yet I feel so sad within as the sparks burst in myriad directions. How do I follow them all, keep them safe, experience the joy, the growth, the wonder? So much to do, so many places to be, so much to learn.
MIRACLE
“The place where light and dark begin to touch is where miracles arise.”
Where is that place in me, the line where Light and Dark arise, the horizon where miracles arise? If I fear the Dark, keep myself safe in the Light, I will never be a miracle. I will never know my deepest self, never burst forth into true life, never be one who loves and gives and grows and lives.
And writes from the heart, not the mind.
Is this birth into Miracle not a process of purification? The Light bringing purity to the Dark purifying the effervescence of the Light into purity reborn? Where else can that occur expect in the place where miracles begin?
Where do the messages, the stories come from? The Light? The Dark? Emanating from both, caught in their own symmetry, their own purity, they burst forth only where they touch – the place of miracles. Intuition, pure and reborn. Miraculous Life.
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As a writer, obviously you understand the crucial importance of knowing your readers. You can spend hours researching your target audience to discover what they already know and what they still need – and hopefully want – to know. Then you organize, write and polish with them in mind. But no matter how polished, are you sure you’ve put the information or story into the proper words? By this I mean words that will give your writing the feel appropriate to your readership.
While English has an amazing root diversity, most of our words come from two sources: the French and Latin used by the upper classes and nobles; and the coarser language of the Anglo-Saxon peasants. Whatever you write, either fiction or non-fiction, it’s important to keep in mind the roots of the words you choose. Those stemming from the French/Latin influence have a more sophisticated sentience; Anglo-Saxon root words own an earthy, everyday feel. A highly educated audience may feel talked down to if the piece is filled with Anglo-Saxon root words. They’ll feel it’s too juvenile and will stop reading partway through. A less educated audience may find French/Latin root words too hoity-toity for their taste, too high-brow or better-than-thou. They’ll get frustrated or even angry enough to close up the pages. And mixing the two often lends an inadvertent schizophrenic feel to the piece, causing everyone to put it down.
Try writing a short piece using French/Latin root words (see the partial list below). Then re-write it, substituting Anglo-Saxon root words. You’ll be amazed at the difference in feel of the two pieces, even though they say the same thing. And it’ll be easy to see why knowing your roots is as important as knowing your audience.
(Key: FL = French/Latin; AS = Anglo-Saxon)
AS = Woman; FL = Female AS = Happiness; FL = Felicity
AS = Hut; FL = Cottage AS = Bill; FL = Beak
AS = Friendship; FL = Amity AS = Dress; FL = Clothe
AS = Help; FL = Aid AS = Folk; FL = People
AS = Hearty; FL = Cordial AS = Holy; FL = Saint
AS = Deep; FL = Profound AS = Lonely; FL = Solitary
AS = Love; FL = Charity AS = Begin; FL = Commence
AS = Hide; FL = Conceal AS = Feed; FL = Nourish
AS = Inner/Outer; FL = Interior/Exterior
AS = Leave ; FL = Abandon AS = Die; FL = Perish
AS = Mouth; FL = Oral AS = Nose; FL = Nasal
AS = Eye; FL = Ocular AS = House; FL = Domicile
AS = Book; FL = Literary AS = Moon; FL = Lunar
AS = Sun; FL = Solar As = Watery; FL = Aquatic
AS = Town; FL = Urban AS = Kingly; FL = Regal
AS = Youthful; FL = Juvenile AS = Wretched; FL = Miserable
AS = Same; FL = Identical AS = Weighty; FL = Ponderous
AS = Share; FL = Portion AS = Murder/Killing; FL = Homicide
AS = Manly; FL = Virile AS = Up; FL = Ascend
AS = Tale; FL = Story AS = Come near; FL = Approach
AS = Cold; FL = Frigid AS = Freedom; FL = Liberty
AS = Heavenly; FL = Celestial AS = Give/Hand; FL = Present/Deliver
AS = Darling; FL = Favorite AS = Sleeplessness; FL = Insomnia
AS = Half; FL = Semi AS = Hinder; FL = Prevent
AS = Look for; FL = Search AS = Put out; FL = Extinguish
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